It still look like a pencil artwork from full size to me, and it's a good thing. The place may look spooky but the spookier thing that makes this work successful is the pose of your hands and especially your facial expression. Great actor.
I love this but hate it because it makes me gasp for air! I seriously am bothered by this art because it makes me feel like I am also suffocating! That tells me it is a great piece! I simply love it!!! I only wish I had a percent of your talent!